-White-

• I love fishing, so yes the introduction caught my attention. 

• White remembers specific moments when he had been there before.

• I like how he described the smell of lumbar and how he described how beautiful the lake was. I pictured the lake he was at.

• There wasn't really any dialoge. Just memories.

• Readers will connect to White if they have expeinced fishing, camping and doing all the other lake activities he talks about. I connected to his essay because I grew up going to the lake every weekend and i remember the smell of wood and animals I saw hiking or the fishes I caught.

• Yes, he includes a lot of memories that were very important to him.