Democracy of Goods.

The analytical tool being used here is to express how using everyday, ordinary products can make you feel like you are top of the rank or make you feel like you belong in a place that seems out of reach. Most products still use this kind of advertisement. All advertisers want to make their products more appealing. I haven't picked out my ad yet but I think reading this will help me choose.

Ad on TV

For me, the beauty advertisements get me. I find myself going out to buy the new hottest things. The ads that work for me are ads like Dove commercials. It shows average sized girls and not tall skinny models. I want to buy more of Dove stuff because of this. When I see ads with tall skinny girls it doesn't make me want to buy the product because not a single product out there can make you taller or skinnier. One of the Dove's ad shows humor between a couple friends and what soaps they use. I love all of Doves advertising. I don't dislike anything about them. I have brought many Dove products since their new commercials have came on.

Small Dog Breeds Make the Best Pets

My thesis is that small breeds of dogs, tend to make better pets than large breeds and better than other animals for various reasons. Some of my main points include: most small dogs are low shedders, trained easily, great lap dogs and even good secrurity. I've included why they are better than bigger breed dogs, cats, snakes, farm animals, and other animals. I think explaining why smaller dogs are better than these other pets work good for my essay. I wanted to do other animals than just dogs.

Works Cited.

I'm working on finding more.

Small Dogs - Small Dog Breeds - Toy Dog Breeds - Toy Dogs. JustDogBreeds.com. Web. 17 Oct.    

           2011. <http://www.allsmalldogbreeds.com/>.

"Small Dog Syndrome - Small Dogs vs. Medium and Large Dogs." Dog Breed Info Center®, DBI. 1998.

Web. 17 Oct. 2011. <http://www.dogbreedinfo.com/articles/smalltoydogs.htm>.

Style.

I don't really enjoy writing essays a lot, I am more of an creative writer. I like having a set top to write about so essay writing really doesn't come natuaral to me. One reminder said write in a way that comes naturally. While revising my essay, I am going to try to focus on writing my essay on what I feel comfortable with.

One reminder  was do not inject opinion, but I feel like for my persuasive essay I need to add a little of my opinion to argue about my topic.